
She lifted her head and noticed the clouds
bringing snowflakes from the East.
And while an old song was playing
she thought, with a certain amazement,
that snowflakes had always been dancing
exactly the same,
year come,
year gone.
She was taken back to these once upon
excitements and longings
to a time where snowflakes
were crystals of promise
of a world still unmapped.
And while she listened to the old song playing
she realised, with a certain nostalgia,
that she had been travelling
from snowfall to snowfall
forgetting about childhood’s promise.
She now had arrived at the country of duty
in a place where snowflakes
were drops of frozen water
with no chance of survival
But now, while the snowflakes were tumbling
they seemed to remind her
that they’d always been dancing
and will be dancing
people come,
people gone
and that they were hers to seize.
Loved it !
wow โ this is deeply amazing and greatly written!!!
Thank you ๐
Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Please read and enjoy the work of a talented writer and artist.
Thank you so much for reblogging! Very much appreciated ๐๐๐
I enjoyed this one and you are welcome Eva.
Beautiful artwork and powerful and worthwhile poetry. A amazing poem.
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You are welcome Eva.
very nice, and the art is an excellent compliment to the words
Thank you ๐๐
Hello Old Friend!
Oh, you are still around! That’s nice! I am not always here, but often enough to be happy to encounter those who have been here from the beginning with me. Glad you are still around ๐
I love your nostalgic words and the pretty windows looking at the snowflakes. โโญ
Thank you Robin ๐โค๏ธโค๏ธ
You’re very welcome! I always wish I could split my time better and stay in touch with creative people like you. It helps motivate me! Take care of yourself! xo ๐๐
Aww that is so sweet, me too, often life takes over and I do not have time for much. But Iโm always happy to find you here, when I do have time ๐๐
Thanks for taking an interest in my site – it has enabled me to find yours! This poem has a wonderful lilt!
Thank you ๐๐ your site is inspiring.
Magical, Eva! You inspire me to go looking for my own creativity which has been on a lengthy diving adventure. Time for it to come home! ๐
Thank you, yes, creativity is one of those things; it needs to be fed otherwise it kind of dies of negligence ๐๐น๐น๐น
Wonderful
Thank you so much ๐ ๐๐