cloudswimming, sunsinging
wallshifting, treelifting
Who says if all is set and done
when just one voice can crack the dawn?
goldbreaking, tearbaking
muddancing, lightlancing
Who sets the rules of whole and grail
when just one glance can tear the veil?
bloomfreezing, airseezing
moonturning, tideburning
Who carries the law of right and wing
when just one thought can down the king?
songmolding, seafolding
skychanting, lifegranting
If no one can tell of truth and prayer
why be afraid to turn and dare?
Fascinating post.Thank you Eva for liking my post and for keeping in touch.all the best.jalal
Thank you too π
Refreshing and unique selection of wordplay. Loved it! π
Thank you so much!
Always a pleasure.
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Brilliant poem, Eva π
Thank you! π
Thank you Eva. Good to see your face and new writing!
Thanks, yes I took some time off blogging, got a new puppy dog and it was taking up all my time. But I tell you: it is sooooooo worth it – it is like an angel landed in our household π
Congratulations.
Unconditional love!!!
yep, there is much love (but she gets a lot too) and most rewarding: she is never in a bad mood!
Brave words
Thank you very much! I admire those who actually put the words to action π