a rip in the haze
a split in the rays
a seed in the bloom
a room in the womb
a print in the cloud
so not
to
end
in a
grievous
shroud
one drop in the air
one line in a prayer
one seat in a town
one gem in a crown
one truth in a lie
so not
to
end
in a
rueful
sigh
we deal with life’s board
to lift off the sword
that hangs as a threat
and tend to forget
what is our lot
to
matter
at
all
or
probably not
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This is a lovely piece.
I definitely am following you., and recommending you to someone who writes somewhat in similar manneI definitely am following you., and recommending you to someone who writes somewhat in similar manneI definitely am following you., and recommending you to someone who writes somewhat in similar manneI definitely am following you., and recommending you to someone who writes somewhat in similar manner.
Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou…;-)
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🙂
Pardon, my particular browser has peculiar challenges. Happily, you somehow got the whole message. “…in similar manner.” I think was what ended it. Sometimes it cuts off half the message.
Keep up writing, Eva.
no problem! I thought it was rather funny 🙂 and thanks!
You won’t be the first. I also think it is.
You are welcome, Evvvy!
Amazing creation!
Thank you!
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BUT…IT DOES MATTER…TO SOMEONE, ESPECIALLY THE ONE LIVING!!!
absolutely, what I meant was that sometimes people try so hard to matter (to be “someone”) especially in our days and age and they tend to forget that being “someone” doesn’t matter in the grand scheme of things – but being someone to someone that is what matters, so tried to play a bit with that idea. Thank you for reblogging!
BEAUTIFUL. LOVED IT. 🙂
Thanks Shweta 🙂
the poem, ……..and this!
‘rip in the haze
a split in the rays
a seed in the bloom
a room in the womb
a print in the cloud’
such imagery in 24 words…….thank you.
Thank you so much! 🙂
Some magical lines here…
a room in the womb
one line in a prayer
one truth in a lie
to
matter
at
all
or
probably not
Beautiful poem…
Thank you so much Aka! greatly appreciated 🙂
Wonderful photo, too.
Thank you!
Hello Eva
I was running out the door when I first saw this. I couldnt comment until now. I love the up and down the poem makes me go through.
Thank you! Really appreciate your comment 🙂